Laura Cummings

Rookie (Friday 16th October 1987 / Alexander Hospital, Redditch.)

Dont Bite Me! - Poem by Laura Cummings

dont bite me,
dont scar me,
dont take my life with your hands,
dont rip me,
stop hurting me,
im inside you,
stop falling,
you take me with you,
stop cutting,
stop hateing,
stop dispising yourself,
i am you,
when you hurt yourself,
you hurt me too.

Comments about Dont Bite Me! by Laura Cummings

  • (7/26/2006 5:40:00 PM)

    Truthful poem.. i like (Y) (Report) Reply

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  • (7/24/2006 12:18:00 PM)

    laura i think ur very strange and need siceatric help dearest (Report) Reply

  • (11/11/2005 4:00:00 AM)

    Wow - wicked! Really hits home, but kinda 'sadmaking'... (Report) Reply

  • (7/27/2005 11:14:00 AM)

    i really love this one. the simplicity of it works really well in this context. blunt, it really gets the point across. i like this percpective..its all..different. WAY2GO. :) (Report) Reply

  • (3/26/2005 4:13:00 PM)

    scary but still very interesting (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 15, 2005

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