Doubts Are Mirages, Sometimes.. Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

Doubts Are Mirages, Sometimes..

Rating: 5.0


The success not many miles away,
Doubts confuse the minds sway,
The life is full of adventures,
Sorrows and tears are mirages,
When the pursued illusion dislodges,
The ability of you and I emerges,
Show the signs of weakness nowhere,
Acquire the skills of evolution, hardware,
Apply the tactic of intelligence, software,
Never let to be thrown into dumpster.
We have one life that is confirmed,
Let us live this life with enjoyment.
When we think and do everything good,
We will not be left alone in wet shroud.
When we keep the welfare of others in our mind,
We will be there in someone's mind to bind.
The success not many miles away,
Doubts confuse the minds sway,
The life is full of adventures,
Sorrows and tears are mirages.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendran Muthiah 01 July 2012

Wonderful! Rated *****. But I think, elision(removal of words, letters) is not necessary in some lines. They may be'The success is', to sway', 'tactics'. The punctuation mark 'comma' is used in places where 'the full stop' may be used. Thanks.

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