Down Not Up Poem by Nassy Fesharaki

Down Not Up

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Down not up

On the wall
-sit two knobs
-each is marked:
- "Up" - "Down"

I see her standing
-she is there
-in waiting
-and has pushed
-both the knobs.

It can be for one cause
-either of craze or; unaware! ?

She has come from far
- (a village, small town,
-in China…)

Feels like fish on the sand
-blind is to the world
-where she lives;
-is drowned!

In a way is care-less
-to values of others.

Comes the car in the wall
-to take us…going up…

Down we go
-she and I…

Time is lost
-partly mine!

I cannot say a word
-to Chinese who knows not
-language, way of life…

Bit my lip with patience
-could I do something else?

Tuesday, March 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: uncertainty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 14 March 2018

Nassy, such an interesting write...10+++++

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Nassy Fesharaki 14 March 2018

Thank you very much...you are kind.

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