Down The Drain Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Down The Drain

Rating: 4.8


The factory loomed
at the top of the hill.
A pub sign reflected
in yesterdays puddle
when it started again

The next days morning
mixed the muddle
with the rains
darkening frown
on falling leaves
from a tree dripping wet
with the stain of the sky,
which proved messier yet
from chimney soot
in the root of the road
and underfoot.

A broken bottle,
nights empty threat,
soaked fag ends,
the torn slip of a bet,
a stench of beer
from an open door
of a toilet crawled,
where someone had pissed
on the concrete floor
and drawled
dribbled words
with the wetness andmess.

All that remained
was the aftermath,
a drenched, stale mourning,
and a big bass broom
to sweep the path
as the gurgling gutter
was muttering glass
and disappeared
down the drain.

Thursday, March 7, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: concrete,rains
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Halls 10 March 2013

Love this Sally and I echo the other comments as it is so powerful in words and meaning. I can picture this as I used to drink in a pub like the one mentioned! Brilliant.

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Sally P. P. 03 May 2020

I used to play darts and was familiar with those places. X

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Dave Walker 08 March 2013

A fantastic poem, great wording.

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Sally P P. 03 May 2020

Thanks for your sweet comment, Dave.

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Valerie Dohren 07 March 2013

Very descriptive Sally - well penned.

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Sally P. P. 03 May 2020

Glad you read it, Val. Thanks.

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Sally Plumb Plumb

Sally Plumb Plumb

Haverhill Suffolk England
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