Edward Kofi Louis

Gold Star - 325,174 Points (13th October 1961 / Accra, GHANA)

Downfall! - Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Downfall!
Indiscipline and corruption;
To suffer for so long,
And now, to the rescue.

The mirror! !
The terror,
With the sorrows of life;
To suffer for so long.

Indiscipline!
Under the yoke of voilence;
With the observations of the land,
And, to suffer for so long.

Ad hoc! ! !
Very delicate;
With clashes here and there,
And, with casualties.

Topic(s) of this poem: disasters


Comments about Downfall! by Edward Kofi Louis

  • Valsa George (12/14/2015 4:02:00 AM)


    Violence and bloodshed resulting in a number of casualties! All these lead to endless suffering for man. We should see that there is peace in the world instead of violence! A poem with a great message! (Report) Reply

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