10 steps to heaven are like the '10 Commandments'!
But look around and see the truth;
Are we really keeping the laws? ! !
Then, we need to rethink to follow these steps.
‘10 Commandments’ ~ Has been read and taught in myriad ways we academically know much since time immemorial … Even from Nursery Books so many good teachings we know now time to follow … And it is the exercise we need ….a reminder ‘Memo’ to me… Thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Edward Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
mind blowing words you are a word genius
Are we really keeping the laws? ! ! ohh this poem is like a preaching...... are we following the commandments.... this poem leads to a self examination.... thank u dear poet. tony
How know better than ourselves! Good observations
Edward, you make a cogent point, I have not been around since I can no longer enter the system.
nice post dear poet
Law Makers are seen Law Breakers and hence a total change in the mind set of people is needed. Top star
We need righteous laws to lead us! ! ! Obeying them! ! ! ! For the peace of the world. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.
We have to redefine laws, Edward A poet like you can do
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
hmmmmmm nice poem i like ur style to present poem in brief form