Edward Kofi Louis

Gold Star - 423,071 Points (13th October 1961 / Accra, GHANA)

10 Steps To Heaven - Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

10 steps to heaven are like the '10 Commandments'!
But look around and see the truth;
Are we really keeping the laws? ! !
Then, we need to rethink to follow these steps.

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/19/2018 3:32:00 PM)

    Righteous Morals! ! With righteous laws.

    Thanks for your comment on my poem.

    Stay blessed always.
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (4/19/2018 1:18:00 PM)

    The truth will free you and lead you to God...... yes commandments help us a lot to be near God and reach the mighty Abode of God.. tha nk u dear poet. tony (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/12/2018 8:30:00 AM)

    Righteous Morals! ! ! ! !

    Peace to all mankind!

    Thanks for your comment on my poem.
    Stay blessed always.
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/12/2018 8:30:00 AM)

    Righteous Morals! ! ! ! !

    Peace to all
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/11/2018 6:41:00 AM)

    Positiveness! ! ! Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (4/11/2018 4:48:00 AM)

    we need to rethink to follow these steps.
    I agree.
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  • Rose Marie Juan-austin (1/19/2018 8:40:00 AM)

    A succinct write with great punch. It echoes a strong reminder to keep and follow divine laws. Well executed.10 (Report) Reply

  • Dr Dillip K Swain (1/19/2018 5:48:00 AM)

    An insightful write! Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem with us! (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (3/20/2017 6:59:00 AM)

    A thought provoking write. We need to rethink, we need to ask ourselves. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (2/25/2017 7:57:00 PM)

    Are we really keeping the laws? ! !
    - - - - - - - -Yes, we should always ask our conscience this question.A well written poem.Thanks for sharing.
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  • Akhtar Jawad (1/23/2017 9:03:00 AM)

    Just a good belief is not enough, the decisive thing is to act in accordance of a good belief. (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2016 5:55:00 PM)

    10 Steps To Heaven
    To be succinct and profound is the mark of a true poet. And you are of the best, Edward!
    There is nothing, but truth in this poem. I sincerely wish that all those hypocrites who claim to be fighting in the name of their God would take a good long hard look at how they're destroying humanity. What kind of animal sends their own 9 years old daughter to be blown up. And doesn't even have the guts to take their own life on their so-called mission for God. I say don't kill them and make some believe that they are martyrs. Sentence them to life imprisonment and force them to watch videos of all the evil and carnage that they have committed against humanity and God. And then show them what's possible in the true name of God.
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  • Flower Navarre (11/14/2016 8:09:00 PM)

    Wonderful Poem! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much, For Sharing This! ! ! 10s!
    Made Me Smile! ! ! Many Blessings! ! !
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  • B.m. Biswas (9/14/2016 9:59:00 AM)

    especially the title is wonderful....
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  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/1/2016 9:30:00 AM)

    Thoughtful write. Loved reading it. Very well said in last line.... we need to rethink to follow these steps. (Report) Reply

  • Golden Nkemdirim (7/25/2016 9:45:00 AM)

    this is a food for thought for everyone. each of us at every point need to re-think our steps. (Report) Reply

  • Adeline Foster (7/17/2016 2:54:00 PM)

    Interesting concept thought more research is needed. Read mine - Boomerang -
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  • Valsa George (7/13/2016 12:32:00 AM)

    Great write Edward...! Yes, we have to re think it! (Report) Reply

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (6/24/2016 10:32:00 PM)

    the tenth and the last step is death with out which we cannot enter heaven and which is not liked to cross by anyone. (Report) Reply

  • Luo Zhihai (6/13/2016 5:10:00 AM)

    10 steps to heaven.
    In China, the old saying: one step to heaven.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 25, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, May 16, 2011

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