10 Steps To Heaven Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

10 Steps To Heaven

Rating: 4.6


10 steps to heaven are like the '10 Commandments'!
But look around and see the truth;
Are we really keeping the laws? ! !
Then, we need to rethink to follow these steps.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Farah Ilyas 15 May 2011

hmmmmmm nice poem i like ur style to present poem in brief form

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 08 September 2010

‘10 Commandments’ ~ Has been read and taught in myriad ways we academically know much since time immemorial … Even from Nursery Books so many good teachings we know now time to follow … And it is the exercise we need ….a reminder ‘Memo’ to me… Thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Edward Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Captain Herbert Poetry 28 June 2015

A simple poem but a difficult question to answer A good reflection Good work

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 August 2018

Are we really keeping the laws? ! ! ohh this poem is like a preaching...... are we following the commandments.... this poem leads to a self examination.... thank u dear poet. tony

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Mary Skarpathiotaki 28 August 2018

How know better than ourselves! Good observations

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PANAGIOTA ROMIOS 22 October 2021

Edward, you make a cogent point, I have not been around since I can no longer enter the system.

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 14 April 2021

nice post dear poet

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Law Makers are seen Law Breakers and hence a total change in the mind set of people is needed. Top star

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 October 2020

We need righteous laws to lead us! ! ! Obeying them! ! ! ! For the peace of the world. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 29 September 2020

We have to redefine laws, Edward A poet like you can do

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