Edward Kofi Louis

Gold Star - 316,882 Points (13th October 1961 / Accra, GHANA)

10 Steps To Heaven - Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

10 steps to heaven are like the '10 Commandments'!
But look around and see the truth;
Are we really keeping the laws? ! !
Then, we need to rethink to follow these steps.


Comments about 10 Steps To Heaven by Edward Kofi Louis

  • Loppo Louie (5/27/2017 9:27:00 AM)


    Ah heaven what will
    it be like, better than riding
    a bike...
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  • Geetha Jayakumar (3/20/2017 6:59:00 AM)


    A thought provoking write. We need to rethink, we need to ask ourselves. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (2/25/2017 7:57:00 PM)


    Are we really keeping the laws? ! !
    - - - - - - - -Yes, we should always ask our conscience this question.A well written poem.Thanks for sharing.
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  • Akhtar Jawad (1/23/2017 9:03:00 AM)


    Just a good belief is not enough, the decisive thing is to act in accordance of a good belief. (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2016 5:55:00 PM)

    10 Steps To Heaven
    To be succinct and profound is the mark of a true poet. And you are of the best, Edward!
    There is nothing, but truth in this poem. I sincerely wish that all those hypocrites who claim to be fighting in the name of their God would take a good long hard look at how they're destroying humanity. What kind of animal sends their own 9 years old daughter to be blown up. And doesn't even have the guts to take their own life on their so-called mission for God. I say don't kill them and make some believe that they are martyrs. Sentence them to life imprisonment and force them to watch videos of all the evil and carnage that they have committed against humanity and God. And then show them what's possible in the true name of God.
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  • Rebecca Navarre (11/14/2016 8:09:00 PM)


    Wonderful Poem! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much, For Sharing This! ! ! 10s!
    Made Me Smile! ! ! Many Blessings! ! !
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  • B.m. Biswas (9/14/2016 9:59:00 AM)


    lovely....
    especially the title is wonderful....
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  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/1/2016 9:30:00 AM)


    Thoughtful write. Loved reading it. Very well said in last line.... we need to rethink to follow these steps. (Report) Reply

  • Golden Nkemdirim (7/25/2016 9:45:00 AM)


    this is a food for thought for everyone. each of us at every point need to re-think our steps. (Report) Reply

  • Adeline Foster (7/17/2016 2:54:00 PM)


    Interesting concept thought more research is needed. Read mine - Boomerang -
    Adeline
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  • Valsa George (7/13/2016 12:32:00 AM)


    Great write Edward...! Yes, we have to re think it! (Report) Reply

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (6/24/2016 10:32:00 PM)


    the tenth and the last step is death with out which we cannot enter heaven and which is not liked to cross by anyone. (Report) Reply

  • Luo Zhihai (6/13/2016 5:10:00 AM)


    10 steps to heaven.
    In China, the old saying: one step to heaven.
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  • Mihaela Pirjol (6/3/2016 6:27:00 AM)


    A wise path to better living one's life in harmony with the law of nature. (Report) Reply

  • Mohabeer Beeharry (5/30/2016 1:25:00 PM)


    Very true. I am nt sure we are following the right path. But who is to judge? Hopefully we will find the right path some day.
    Blessings
    Mohabeer Beeharry
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  • Soulful Heart (5/29/2016 4:35:00 AM)


    punched right away.......short n to the point....self analysis is what a human very badly needs today......agreed every word...10 (Report) Reply

  • Mihaela Pirjol (5/4/2016 12:21:00 PM)


    A great statement here, a great message too. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (3/20/2016 7:44:00 AM)


    Thoughtful. Simplification of religious rights are revived from time to time. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Tapan M. Saren (3/4/2016 2:56:00 AM)


    I'm thinking after reading it (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (2/24/2016 11:45:00 PM)


    Verily, a thoughtful one (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 25, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, May 16, 2011


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