indira babbellapati

Rookie - 106 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

Dream,3 Senryu - Poem by indira babbellapati

life within a dream
death within life
empty the hands!

dream with eyes wide open
for dreams to float right in front
of your eyes!

dreams-day or night
does that matter when they
infuse life!

Comments about Dream,3 Senryu by indira babbellapati

  • (6/2/2012 1:35:00 AM)

    Can corelate my thinking to this poem very closely! ! ! ! ! a certain degree of cohesiveness exist between the lines; which gives it a beautiful essence...... (Report) Reply

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  • (5/30/2012 8:54:00 AM)

    for ms. shahzia batool

    empty hands
    is the essence.
    dreams, way of life.
    life encompasses death!
    empty hands, the way we live
    empty hands, the way we die!
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  • Shahzia Batool (5/30/2012 12:49:00 AM)

    presence of abstract makes the concrete possible...eyes are nothing w/o sight, w/o dreams....i dint get why empty the hands? ? ?'s thought-provoking..... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 28, 2012

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