indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
indira babbellapati
visakhapatnam, india
Wednesday, September 16, 2009

Drama Named Desire*(Originally Titled 'Passion')

Rating: 3.2
desire hurled
into the wilderness of passion
hits back with the force
of a boomerang
desire burning the core
leaves one exhausted
throws one as a ragged doll
into a nondescript corner
desire flying high
falls flat to ground
like a wounded bird

directionlessly directed

this intiguing drama of desire
has no written script...

*edited on sarvesh kulkarni's suggestion

indira babbellapati
Anand Madhukar 22 September 2009
The anatomy of desire finds an eloquent expression in your words.
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Patrick A. Martin 20 September 2009
Desire passion whichever it is both and it is brillant -10
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Indira Babbellapati 17 September 2009
u may be right, sarvesh. what u suggested sounds logical too. my problem is i couldn't decide which triggers which. moreover, you know by now that what i write is determined by the moment i experience that fleeting emotion that i try to express as closer to its authenticity as possible...thnq for ur suggestion. let me rethink...
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Sarvesh Kulkarni 17 September 2009
hmm...yes...true. i would put it more as, 'desire hurled into the wilderness of passion' just telling. loved the poem though.
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if one were the unravel the metaphors in this........... draws would drop. this is good.
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Dr Kamran Haider 16 September 2009
'directionless yet directed' Wow Indira... wonderful piece... That is quite relevant to me... But even one falls to the ground, yet it feels lovely to soar high with endless desire... Beautiful...
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