Dream Tear Poem by Barry Middleton

Dream Tear

Rating: 5.0


the moon is sinking in the west
where it becomes a tear
that falls upon forsaken stars
beyond the atmosphere

and there appears a silhouette
within the grieving night
then I recall the one I loved
before the death of light

the dark reveals a broken dream
a moonlit rhapsody
another time another place
in breathless harmony

but soon the sun will rise again
to steal my dream away
yet I would rather hold the night
than emptiness of day

still dawn deprives my fantasy
and robs all hope of bliss
as light intrudes into my room
to seal a parting kiss

Dream Tear
Wednesday, October 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,love and loss,memories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 06 October 2016

This is so lovely. Beautifully written. Nature n feelings are intermingled perfectly. Yes, we'd rather have the dreams of night than the emptiness of the day. A super 10

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Barry Middleton 06 October 2016

Thank you Nosheen. I am so glad you like it. There can come a time in life when dreams are much better than reality.

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