Janie Neilson

Dreamer

Fluffy ball
Black and white
The penguin chick
Cold

Muffled whiteness
Everywhere
Waiting in the
Snow

Taller, taller
Emptiness
Nothing but
Hope

Handsome stranger
Swirling flakes
Falling in
Love

Precious gift
Creamy hue
A silent
Dream

Dazzling brightness
Shattered peace
Awakening new
Life

Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 11, 2009

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  • alice sunderland (1/16/2009 3:42:00 AM)

    like this one too! its got some great expressions in it. well worked/thought out!

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  • Fiona Davidson (1/11/2009 4:42:00 AM)

    Enjoted reading this Janie...thank you for sharing it....

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  • Allen StebleAllen Steble (1/11/2009 4:34:00 AM)

    i like how the initial lines build up to the concluding thoughts, each something life will place the hands of its recipients, great piece and nice style :)

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