Dreams Poem by Madhuri Ganti

Dreams

Rating: 5.0


Two souls stand
as the rain washes
the window panes
of dust and pain
of loneliness and wanting
their eyes set skywards
while pools and puddles of hope
form unseemly beneath their feet.
life evolves on ground
But dreams are skywards

Friday, August 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
rainy day
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 13 August 2016

Life evolves on ground But dreams are skywards. Beautiful inference and welcome to PH.

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Menato San 13 August 2016

Dreams.Amazing.Thanks for sharing

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Kelly Kurt 12 August 2016

A lovely poem, Madhuri. Welcome to poemhunter

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 August 2016

The dreams that aims at the sky, the dust and lonliness washed away by the rain in this mundane world, the pools of hope on which we all build our lives. Everything is evolving here on the ground....... the two souls........... thank you. this is a fine poem with so much of imagination, thinking and an evolving philosophy which connects the earth and the heavens. liked it very much dear poetess. tony

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Madhuri Ganti 12 August 2016

this is my first attempt in a posting a poem. my dream fulfilled

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