Dreams Of Tears Poem by Siim Andreas Peter Saarva

Dreams Of Tears

Rating: 4.5


I dream about you all the time,
And I want to give you all the stars,
But that would be a crime,
I can see you, in my dreams,
The beautiful and shining eyes,
Forcing out thunders that flies,
My heart with love it feeds,
Thunders of love, to fill my needs,
My stomach and all my fears,
Breaking me down, and giving me tears,
Tears with love, running down my cheek,
One for each, a river running down,
So beautiful eyes, thou blinding my mind,
A weak breaze, in the morning,
Fills me up, with passion, what can i find,
The day passing by, I'm dreaming my way,
Wishing you were here, to take me away,
To a beautiful place, called heaven or earth,
Love eachother to give one a birth.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Mcmanus 14 October 2009

This is very nicely written, I like this style of poem, well done.

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Prakash Mehra 13 October 2009

I am fond of rhyming. Perfectly decorated.

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Afzal Shauq 13 October 2009

you seem good poet and this piece is one of your rich poems..heartfelt one and quite interesting..well constructed and the verses are professionally inter linked..appreciate you 10/10

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