Dreamy Land Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Dreamy Land

Rating: 2.8


I live on dreamy land
Where you can't find any friend
Love don't mature and end
There leaves behind nothing much to amend

People leave behind pain and agony
This has been experienced by many
So many commit suicides in love race
As they have no courage to hold the face

It is lovely age that demands union
You always go in for best companion
But fail as it does not meet true standard
You look more to backward than forward

You are engulfed with doubts
What will happen and talked about?
It results in the confusion state
You go for more stories to relate

Either of the part feels insecure
As they are not pretty sure
What is the goal before them?
You will be praised and compared to gem

Suddenly you find world doesn't belong to you
Whatever you tried was not meant to be true
You were running after illusory things
You needed more time o try for something

Their beautiful dreamland may turn barren soon
You may feel hot sun in the afternoon
It may burn your skin with lots of problems
The relief may not reach to you without troubles

The moment you feel insecurity
The love evaporates with its quality
What leaves behind is deep shock!
That shall only drain tears from the stock

You are loved for flash and bones
You will be hated when it is gone
Nice romance and love is undone
The last and foremost conclusion is forgone

So have patience in selection
Don't haste in any of the action
If you can endure trauma, shocks and pain
Well, it is left to the individual to think about loss or gain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 February 2012

Chris Jibero Very nice.In the same wavelength now.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 February 2012

I live on dreamy land Where you can’t find any friend

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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