Drifting Away Poem by me poet yeps poet

Drifting Away



The more I love
the more you drift away
why do you do it
in such a way

Life is meant to enjoy
I pray
just follow my pathway

As you don't love to do
what I want you to
then blame me not
for the shallow river
where I leave you

knowing not
that you can't swim
use your imagery
and remember
that life can be lonely
after me
who will salvage you

and

upon whose shoulder will you rest
have you ever thought of it

I am still holding on
but for how long
who can that forecast
when by physical body
to flames will be cast

soon I will be an envelope
worth of ashes
just to be strewn about
the distant forest

I don't want to be buried.

Wednesday, June 12, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death,poetic expression,wife,husband,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I had PABLO NERUDA IN MIND.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rohit 30 June 2019

Good people are always remembered.

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Anjandev Roy 13 June 2019

Life is meant to enjoy. I agree with you.But...... Love her the most, She will surely come to ashore. anjandev roy.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 June 2019

yeah its all only poetry we love to live and live to love AR

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Anjandev Roy 12 June 2019

I don't want to be buried..........certainly not. Live long and enjoy.anjandev roy.

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Jane Campion 12 June 2019

The messages of doom are interspersed in this poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 June 2019

A POET'S VISION is unlimited A variety of things can happen unknowingly Who suffers would still remain a mystery till it happens poetess I marvel at your poetic sense thanks Doom happens when it is premature when it's about time it can no longer be doom but a natural occurrence

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 June 2019

I am still holding on but for how long who can that forecast when *MY physical body to flames will be cast (*TYPO)

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