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My Flowery Youth

Youth is that fountain....which must one day dry
no matter how much one may try
youth does die
but in form of aging skin and balding hair
but the heart within remains youthful....till aging....is an age passed dream
youth remains within we still need only watering
what a youth we all have enjoyed....reading our past in your lovely verse
‘tis as if yesterday we were in youth... now 'tis worse... left in memories as in this youthful verse
let youth be the comma of our life..... not a coma where youthful memories die
and within our lonely hearts we cry
Oh youth why did you have to come
just to, simply pass by
tell me why O just why!

Topic(s) of this poem: love, youth

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 27, 2016
Poem Edited: Monday, August 28, 2017

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  • Dennis SpilchukDennis Spilchuk (10/4/2020 9:53:00 AM)

    Youth is a time to cherish, when the soul is free to explore. Aging is a process of time. Very insightful.

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  • Suresh Kumar EkSuresh Kumar Ek (9/21/2020 6:19:00 AM)

    You are sweet seventeen in your poem.
    honeymoon days are ahead.

    Suresh

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  • Harindhar Reddy (5/22/2020 4:41:00 AM)

    Youthful life lasts for some years. Everyone grows older with wrinkles run crisscross on the face....
    True feelings are expressed by the poet.10+ rated and voted.

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  • Varsha MVarsha M (5/15/2020 5:42:00 AM)

    Youth is a fountain..... which must one day dry
    No matter how much one try

    Indeed perfect pictorization of feeling one go through. The phase of life passes away with aging skin and balding hair. Awesome personification of youth transformation as aging set in and balding steal the beauty.
    Beautiful work. Admirations.

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (5/3/2020 7:53:00 AM)

    The first three lines speak everything! A great poem dear poet! My pleasure revisiting this wonderful piece of work!

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  • Vaibhav SimhaVaibhav Simha (4/29/2020 4:00:00 AM)

    The ultimate truth is expressed in this poetry magically.

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (4/26/2020 2:47:00 PM)

    not a coma where youthful memories die
    and within our lonely hearts we cry
    Oh youth why did you have to come
    just to, simply pass by
    tell me why O just why! the young days when we were frivolous and playful full of desires and warmth.. tony

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  • Savita TyagiSavita Tyagi (4/21/2020 7:37:00 PM)

    Let youth be the comma of our life........While the heart always stays youthful.....beautiful and so wellwritten poem with true emotions.

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  • A B Faniki (9/4/2019 5:05:00 PM)

    A thouggtful work. Indeed one can grow old vet bw a youth at heart. Thanks for sharing

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  • Lamar Cole (8/26/2019 12:37:00 PM)

    This is a very good poem about my flowery youth.

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(8/27/2019 12:10:00 PM)

    thankx for ur visit and lovely words LC

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  • Roseann Shawiak (8/15/2019 9:25:00 PM)

    Very well stated regarding youth, this mere poet totally could identify with your words and
    sentiments. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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  • Jagdish Singh RamánaJagdish Singh Ramána (8/13/2019 12:12:00 AM)

    since the life is a journey of steps;
    Darkness to colours, and to light,
    Every one steps into the seven hues;
    Embryo, infadolescent, youth, lover of life,
    Turning man, father, turned gold, the old,
    RASA of all colours, and the last, all sold.
    Youth never ends for lover of life, as Sir! You teaches us how to water the heart that he would linger young. Wonderful!

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(8/13/2019 11:38:00 AM)

    kindness kindness jsr jsr jsr remain young

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  • Prabir GayenPrabir Gayen (8/2/2019 12:24:00 AM)

    let youth be the comma of our life..... not a coma where youthful memories die
    and within our lonely hearts we cry
    Oh youth why did you have to come
    just to, simply pass by
    tell me why O just why! ...very beautiful poem.. youthful fresh

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (7/22/2019 8:30:00 PM)

    4 all who come here to enjoy this poemtree
    THANKS TO YOU SHALL SEND FLOWERS 22 TOO

    to each one @ your cost

    world is changing so mustn't I?

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  • Lyn Paul (7/22/2019 4:04:00 AM)

    This flowery youth has past far to quickly for me. For us all.
    Life is precious.

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (6/29/2019 4:05:00 AM)

    Oh youth why did you have to come/just to, simply pass by/tell me why O just why! Great expression, a great poem......10

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(7/9/2019 9:20:00 PM)

    your kindness is uppermost doc in my heart

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  • Jane Campion (6/13/2019 11:53:00 PM)

    We all are travelling at different rates. A wonderful poem.

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  • Srijita MondalSrijita Mondal (6/11/2019 5:35:00 PM)

    excellent poem with Melody, metaphor and pun..10+++

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  • Prabir GayenPrabir Gayen (6/11/2019 12:55:00 PM)

    Very nice piece of poetry with charming style..//////...

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  • Prabir GayenPrabir Gayen (6/11/2019 12:55:00 PM)

    Very nice piece of poetry with charming style..//////

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