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My Flowery Youth - Poem by me poet yeps poet

Youth is that fountain....which must one day dry
no matter how much one may try
youth does die
but in form of aging skin and balding hair
but the heart within remains youthful....till aging....is an age passed dream
youth remains within we still need only watering
what a youth we all have enjoyed....reading our past in your lovely verse
‘tis as if yesterday we were in youth... now 'tis worse... left in memories as in this youthful verse
let youth be the comma of our life..... not a coma where youthful memories die
and within our lonely hearts we cry
Oh youth why did you have to come
just to, simply pass by
tell me why O just why!

Topic(s) of this poem: love, youth


Comments about My Flowery Youth by me poet yeps poet

  • (9/4/2019 5:05:00 PM)

    A thouggtful work. Indeed one can grow old vet bw a youth at heart. Thanks for sharing (Report)Reply

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  • (8/26/2019 12:37:00 PM)

    This is a very good poem about my flowery youth. (Report)Reply

    Poet Poet(8/27/2019 12:10:00 PM)

    thankx for ur visit and lovely words LC

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  • (8/15/2019 9:25:00 PM)

    Very well stated regarding youth, this mere poet totally could identify with your words and
    sentiments. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
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  • Jagdish Singh Ramana (8/13/2019 12:12:00 AM)

    since the life is a journey of steps;
    Darkness to colours, and to light,
    Every one steps into the seven hues;
    Embryo, infadolescent, youth, lover of life,
    Turning man, father, turned gold, the old,
    RASA of all colours, and the last, all sold.
    Youth never ends for lover of life, as Sir! You teaches us how to water the heart that he would linger young. Wonderful!
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    Poet Poet(8/13/2019 11:38:00 AM)

    kindness kindness jsr jsr jsr remain young

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  • Prabir Gayen (8/2/2019 12:24:00 AM)

    let youth be the comma of our life..... not a coma where youthful memories die
    and within our lonely hearts we cry
    Oh youth why did you have to come
    just to, simply pass by
    tell me why O just why! ...very beautiful poem.. youthful fresh
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  • Poet Poet (7/22/2019 8:30:00 PM)

    4 all who come here to enjoy this poemtree
    THANKS TO YOU SHALL SEND FLOWERS 22 TOO

    to each one @ your cost

    world is changing so mustn't I?
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  • Jez Brul (7/22/2019 6:09:00 PM)

    REvisiting this poem time and again...lovely as it was.. (Report)Reply

    (7/22/2019 8:28:00 PM)

    THANKS TO YOU SHALL SEND FLOWERS 22 TOO

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  • (7/22/2019 4:04:00 AM)

    This flowery youth has past far to quickly for me. For us all.
    Life is precious.
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  • Jez Brul (7/15/2019 6:30:00 PM)

    youth remains within we still need only watering
    Well-said. We have to nourish youth to slow down coming out of it..10+++++++++
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  • Dr Dillip K Swain (6/29/2019 4:05:00 AM)

    Oh youth why did you have to come/just to, simply pass by/tell me why O just why! Great expression, a great poem......10 (Report)Reply

    Poet Poet(7/9/2019 9:20:00 PM)

    your kindness is uppermost doc in my heart

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  • (6/13/2019 11:53:00 PM)

    We all are travelling at different rates. A wonderful poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Srijita Mondal (6/11/2019 5:35:00 PM)

    excellent poem with Melody, metaphor and pun..10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • Prabir Gayen (6/11/2019 12:55:00 PM)

    Very nice piece of poetry with charming style..//////... (Report)Reply

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  • Prabir Gayen (6/11/2019 12:55:00 PM)

    Very nice piece of poetry with charming style..////// (Report)Reply

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  • Prabir Gayen (6/11/2019 12:54:00 PM)

    let youth be the comma of our life..... not a coma where youthful memories die
    and within our lonely hearts we cry
    Oh youth why did you have to come
    just to, simply pass by
    tell me why O just why!
    (Report)Reply

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  • Prabir Gayen (6/11/2019 12:54:00 PM)

    but in form of aging skin and balding hair
    but the heart within remains youthful....till aging....is an age passed dream
    youth remains within we still need only watering
    what a youth we all have enjoyed....reading our past in your lovely verse
    ‘tis as if yesterday we were in youth... now 'tis worse... left in memories as in this youthful verse
    (Report)Reply

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  • Prabir Gayen (6/11/2019 12:54:00 PM)

    Youth is that fountain....which must one day dry
    no matter how much one may try
    youth does die
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  • Poet Poet (5/17/2019 2:41:00 PM)

    This is my third poem
    translated into HINDI
    by none other that the greatest
    TRANSLATOR POET Rajnish Manga
    Thank him please
    read it at his wall if you may wish
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  • Mahtab Bangalee (4/29/2019 5:02:00 AM)

    flowery youth
    never can stop its loving path.................
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  • Poet Poet (4/4/2019 7:11:00 PM)

    thank u all for being as youthful as I am even now (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 27, 2016

Poem Edited: Monday, August 28, 2017


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