Drifting Away Poem by Kristy Artmann Carlisle

Drifting Away

Rating: 5.0


This dark place I call home is too welcoming,
I need an escape yet none can be found,
I feel heavy and afraid, ready for my piece of ground.
I've been here before, I know it all too well,
My own little space I like to call hell.
How can I rid myself?
How can I break the grasp?
Let me ponder in my corner for a while,
Let me think all the thoughts I will think for a mile.
Leave me you smoking darkness, you blithering emptiness, you disturbingly profuse rubble.
I don't want this feeling to linger any longer.
Go back in the shadowy place where you belong.
Allow my sunshine to return.
You wreak havoc where you aren't due a claim and the note you've come to burn is not yours to ignite.
Leave me for I am drifting away.

Friday, January 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dementia,depression,despair,lost
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank Adie 13 January 2018

A good start. Nice idea.

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Chinedu Dike 12 January 2018

Depression - loss of sunshine in a life at its lowest ebb, is aptly portrayed in the poem. An insightful piece of poetry well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Kristy.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 January 2018

Depression is so sad and this is definitely very thought provoking. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned.10

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