Friday, January 12, 2018

Drifting Away Comments

Rating: 5.0

This dark place I call home is too welcoming,
I need an escape yet none can be found,
I feel heavy and afraid, ready for my piece of ground.
I've been here before, I know it all too well,
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Kristy Artmann Carlisle
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Frank Adie 13 January 2018

A good start. Nice idea.

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Chinedu Dike 12 January 2018

Depression - loss of sunshine in a life at its lowest ebb, is aptly portrayed in the poem. An insightful piece of poetry well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Kristy.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 January 2018

Depression is so sad and this is definitely very thought provoking. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned.10

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