Drifting Love Poem by Ashley Hart

Drifting Love

Rating: 4.7


Two lovers once together
One day drift apart
To later in the future
Sail back into each other's hearts

A girl so kind and true
A boy without intention
Except for loving you

An illusion once impossible to find
Now is forever in my heart divine
I'm ready for the long journey ahead
And will love you until I'm dead

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dislocated Heart 16 February 2008

wow.. great job. good luck to you both. well written poem. -Justin

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Elaine Name 16 February 2008

Completely LOVELY! i give it a 10....short, and lovely..

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Haytem A.f 02 October 2008

Love the last 2 lines, good job in general, all the best

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Bobbie Jo ..... 15 May 2008

nice poem. short and sweet. lol

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Cantrell Dicky 23 April 2008

Very sweet and tender, young love is so fresh A nice poem

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Grant Nealy 30 March 2008

A nice little poem, good work

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 23 February 2008

so beautiful..thanks for sharing

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