Friday, October 21, 2011

Driftwood Comments

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I float around in darkness
Like driftwood at sea.
Full of loneliness and hopelessness
Like the barks been ripped from my tree.
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Savannah marie
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Hans Vr 21 October 2011

Poetic expression of feeling lost. Good poem. I like the hope being included And also the prayer... Our Creator is always listening...

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