Driving Over The Cliff Together Poem by elysabeth faslund

Driving Over The Cliff Together

Rating: 5.0


Let's go over the cliff together,
Holding hands, laughing.
It's over for us...
Except for Death.

You picked that awful blouse
At Penny's...never approved
Of your taste...
You knew it.

Laughed each time I made
A face...
You looked good in anything.
You knew it.

You smiled in memory...
Weren't they good
Weren't they happy...
The long hours of work.

I don't want to remember.

Went to your house one day.
You were talking funny,
Walking funny.
'Oh, I just feel bad.'

You liar! You damned liar!
We were Thelma and Louise.
You named us that...I had the
Convertible. You...no Time.

Let us go, hand in hand, into
The horizon. Always the West.
You always knew Sunsets
Always become Sunrises.

Let's go over the cliff together.

You always wanted to see God.
You'll not be seeing Him
For the first time.
God saw you...and kept you.

Goodbye, my friend.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 21 July 2007

Poems like this one come from somewhere beyond spirit. Achingly beautiful without a hint of sentimentality, your loss moves the reader because of what you don't say. Now that's a gift. Wonderful wonderful words. love, Allie xxxx

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E, a stunningly written tribute.... haunting and atmospheric and uniquely memorable, with all its memories. t x

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Marci Made 12 July 2007

This is a beautiful poem, obviously a goodbye to a dear lost one....The title drew me in and the first paragraph......my answer was, hey Thelma, I 'll more than willingly drive over that cliff today with you..love. louise.

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elysabeth faslund

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Thibodaux. Louisiana
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