Torn, whether be 'mum'
Or share inner thoughts
Vague, erratic ideas
Do tend to overflow.
Bits and pieces.. and more
Maybe a tad overboard?
Still undecided where
And what to fiddle with.
Can't be too careful around you
Smart, that you are,
I know you'll see through me
Right from the very start.
For when my minds made up
And I go yap, yapping
My dagger like claws
Will slice through chomping!
really interesting write with ingenuity,18+++, thanks for sharing
Hey...sort of liked it.. It seems to be about being torn between wanting to share your thoughts and not wanting to share your thoughts...right?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i liked this poem..a sweet one..impressive enough