Drop You Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Drop You

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"I was shocked by your gentle touch"
She made hue and cry so much
I calmed her down by saying sorry
But that was real cause for worry

I took decision to depart
As it was nice way to part
She was unsure of association
And I wanted her participation

I noted with pain in heart
But she had decided to depart
She had fine heart that was shocked
I had simple heart that was joked

"You can not clap with single hand"
The legend says first you got be friends
Caring for each other and knowing in person
Then something can be advances as good reasons

Love can be had not for asking
It needs good counsel and backing
Real internal wish and desire
That shall send signals of admirations

This is exactly where we go wrong
Create a rift and go alone
Try to find out simple excuse
And take decision to refuse

But destiny shall smile
As it has direction and lines
It may take you at the peak
Or drop you on ground to make you weak

Thursday, June 5, 2014
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Masterful work. Love is willing to left is needed. Great poem Daniel Belcher2 hours ago A very deep poem. Destiny will deal all of us a hand. Lets hope it's a good one. Excellent work.

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Loved it My Last Goodbye2 minutes ago Awesome

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Gajanan Mishra 05 June 2014

destiny smile, smile of destiny, wonderful sir. matter to feel.

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“I was shocked by your gentle touch” She made hue and cry so much

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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