Saturday, December 3, 2016

Dropping My Mask Comments

Rating: 4.3

Little by little I dropped my mask
Hoping and praying someone would do the task
As the days go by
No one passes through as time shall fly
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Chelsea Palma
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Dr Antony Theodore 28 April 2017

Because without those I love, I'd be hanging by a thread the higher u are the better u see. very nice ideas for life. with a philosophy of your own. liked it very much dear poetess.

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Chinedu Dike 05 March 2017

A well expressed poem embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. you have a wonderful way with words. Thanks for sharing.

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Chelsea Palma 28 April 2017

I'm just glad you enjoyed it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 December 2016

The journey ahead! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Chelsea Palma 03 December 2016

I should be the one thanking you for reading and commenting. Hope you enjoyed my work Edward Kofi Louis

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Kim Barney 03 December 2016

It's true that the closer we get to someone, the better we can get to know them. I like the way you expressed it here: The best of me most don't see It's like climbing a tree The further you go the more you see The higher you are the better you'll know me Well written, Chelsea!

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Chelsea Palma 03 December 2016

Thank you for the compliment. I hope you enjoyed my writing Kim Barney

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