Sunday, September 15, 2024

Drowning Comments

Rating: 4.2

I wish I knew what to say to you
I wish I knew what to do
I know it's stupid, I really do
But I can't help, I keep crawling back to you.
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Ariannah Hannah
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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 October 2024

CONGRATULATIONS! PoemHunter and Team has chosen your touching as The Member Poem Of The Day! TOP Marks for this poem full of melancholy.TFS

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Sharon Namwalizi 29 October 2024

Beautifully written 💙

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Congratulations on POD, dear poet. The narrator discerns that " I've done you wrong, and I know that, too " beautifully expressed

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Zeh SheZ 29 October 2024

This too shall pass. Enjoyed, thanks.

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