Sunday, August 5, 2007

Drowning In Rage Comments

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My eyes hold tears not yet shed
when I close my eyes to sleep
I dream of you and what I lost
as the darkness slowly creeps
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Cohen Raffi 05 August 2007

Uh. its a good poem. sort of metaphoric and symbolic. however you need to inser cammas to indicate pauses

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