Monday, July 15, 2013

Dry Your Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

Remember days gone by when furry dogs would freeze?
I tall tale when I said, ‘I felt heat, I just ate or I just smiled’
Now with a ragged bag and a sack, I am leaving home to chase a dream.
Abandoning you, or saving you? Only you will know.
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Romeo D. Matshaba
COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 14 March 2017

A heart touching sad story impressively narrated. A well drafted and nicely thought out poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Gajanan Mishra 15 July 2013

dry your tears, good poem, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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