Monday, July 7, 2008

Dusts Comments

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she is a woman fond of cleaning
dust and dirt and
almost everything that
makes this house dirty
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Antonio Liao
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she turns to dust and the wind blows her away at last What a turn, a deep and amazingly poetic ending

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Daedalus Labyrinth 07 July 2008

Wow, really well done. I like how you've constructed the poem and the picture it paints of this woman. Thank you

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