The golden sunlight belongs to the sun,
The silver moonlight to the wandering moon;
The stars above in playful patterns run,
Content beneath the heavens' vaulted boon.
The restless waves are cradled by the sea,
The burning day is filled with vibrant light;
The flowers bloom where once was barren lea,
And shadows fall to join the waiting night.
Yet I remain as lonely as the past,
While gardens welcome spring with gentle air;
Wherever my despairing eyes are cast,
No joy remains for me, still lingering there.
The world, to others, is not this burning hell —
A place where only I and solitude dwell.
One major thing always makes a poem good - the ending. I always try to put my best thoughts to my endings. This one has a good end and a link with the overall context. well delivered! !
Superb imageries simulating the field of loneliness......well written
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Awesome yar! U'v creatd v.nyc poem, i lvd it..nd i'v been ur fan...aftr readng it!