Do not become tool
You shall look fool first
As people shall cut jokes
And offer sarcastic strokes
“To fool around”
Is to move aimlessly on ground
Do nothing and disturb others
Cut sorry figure when find no takers
Think bad
And day shall turn into sadness
It shall make you restless
With gloomy face
Try to turn
Sans concern
Happiest day
With no worrisome way
Each day is important
And significant
In its way
To make us comfortable with stay
I love this poem of advice. P Nasarudheen, Kasargod.Kerala Apr 3,2015
Hasmukh Sir, Thank you for sharing the poem. The advice suggested is helpful and worth taking a note. Somewhere down you have used the word concern, which I think, in the context, means worry. Often I feel that your poems would be much easier to understand with a little bit of re-work on the language part, but then it is the choice of the writer readers should respect. Please keep posting. Regards, Supratik Sen, Hyderabad Apr 03,2015
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I would like to translate this poem
Do not become tool You shall look fool first