Friday, September 12, 2008

Easier Love. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Weeks become seasons, but in no mad rush.
Leisurely pleasured, life has become thus
That, comfortably rising, deciding our day,
We work for a while, then take time for play.
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Kris Smith 13 December 2008

To say too much would detract from the poem Just Beautiful thankyou 10 +++ Chris

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Thanks Fay Slimm for teaching us simple instructions: things in common, laughter heard, joy and comfort. People need those and your generous heart give them away. I give a 10, and I confess that the poem benefited me as well. Well done! !

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Bob Blackwell 21 September 2008

Fay, this really is a lovely poem, one that started in a very warm heart. Weeks become seasons but no mad rush, leisurely pleasured, life.....who could ask for more. Bob

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 September 2008

A beautiful poem. Love it.10 for it.

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Tom Balch 12 September 2008

Flows nicely, great rhyme and fantastic subject matter.10+ Tom

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Kathleen West 12 September 2008

An inspriring poem that is uplifting and so true. In the end it is the love we share that is important. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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