Weeks become seasons, but in no mad rush.
Leisurely pleasured, life has become thus
That, comfortably rising, deciding our day,
We work for a while, then take time for play.
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Thanks Fay Slimm for teaching us simple instructions: things in common, laughter heard, joy and comfort. People need those and your generous heart give them away. I give a 10, and I confess that the poem benefited me as well. Well done! !
Fay, this really is a lovely poem, one that started in a very warm heart. Weeks become seasons but no mad rush, leisurely pleasured, life.....who could ask for more. Bob
Flows nicely, great rhyme and fantastic subject matter.10+ Tom
An inspriring poem that is uplifting and so true. In the end it is the love we share that is important. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.
To say too much would detract from the poem Just Beautiful thankyou 10 +++ Chris