Eaten And Consumed Poem by Tessa Richardson

Eaten And Consumed

Rating: 4.8


A darkness surrounds,
And I become lost in it.
I feel consumed by its suddenness.

Its as if I was dumped in a dark cellar...
of my feelings...
Nothing I can do
but let it torture me.

The darkness penetrates my soul
like knives.
Nothing to stop it
It's like being eaten alive.

But this feeling is supernatural..
It scares me to no end!
Controlled by it
Theres only one thing to save me...

That thing doen't exist
For it is my ability to be
As supernatural as it.
Forever lost in it

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 02 December 2008

very deep...very insightful...the last stanza tells artfully all about it... impressive...i liked...ten for you, Tessa...

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Katelyn Dunham 25 November 2008

Deep, dark, and frightening. I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing.

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