Saturday, January 12, 2008

Echoing Love Lost Comments

Rating: 5.0

Crumpled pages read and read
the authors words in someone’s head.
Knowledge of bygone days.
Hidden under dust on the shelf.
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JoJo Bean, Dodgy Dave and Meggie Gultiano
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Imafidon Mac Henry 28 October 2016

Great piece. This is fantastic. I bow to the poet.

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Melvina Germain 26 January 2008

the three of you are intertwined in such a delightful way, your words just flow so beautifully together. A sad picture you all paint here, but just so beautiful and elegantly portrayed. Melvina

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Alison Cassidy 16 January 2008

Crumpled is such an evocative word, and such a wonderful beginning to this piece of romantic melancholy and ultimate resolution. You three certainly seem destined to become one. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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I agree with Sandra. And, so much in so little. t x

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Sandra Fowler 12 January 2008

What a lovely poem. Romance is alive and well on poemhunter. Ten from me. Warmest regards, Sandra

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