Linda Ori

Rookie - 189 Points (08/13/1945 / UTAH)

Ecstasy - Poem by Linda Ori

Behold the depth of unknown bliss
Awakened by a lover's kiss -
Sweet ecstasy unbound!
So tender, yet so passionate
Never shall the heart forget
Contentment once it's found;
Complete surrender - let it flow
Beyond the mind and all you know
Let heaven touch the ground,
And all the mysteries in between
That until now remained unseen
Shall bring the circle 'round,
For love must touch another heart
In order for the dream to start -
Entrust your soul to me.


Comments about Ecstasy by Linda Ori

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (4/18/2008 2:02:00 AM)


    love do exist by the bliss
    passion when intense by the mystery
    the ecstasy seems to flow by the gleams
    that whispers the language of love...................yet with unique imagery when lucid of unique genere, smooching, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing
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  • (6/8/2007 5:54:00 PM)


    Another fine example of your poetic skills. An unusual and effective rhyming system allied to a matching rhythm. And the message is compellingly delivered. A real pleasure to read these Linda. I'm running out of poems by the way. Will there be a delivery soon? Best to you, xxx jim (Report) Reply

  • (1/15/2007 1:37:00 AM)


    Very trim and lyric at the same same. Not a word is wasted. (Report) Reply

  • (7/16/2006 3:14:00 AM)


    Nice Linda loved this one good rhyme schemes and lovely ending very good! !

    Séamus
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  • (7/12/2006 11:01:00 PM)


    Linda, This one resonates with me. The love is within, but the 'other' enables it to sing! I do admire your use of traditional verse structures and the creative jewels you mine using such discipline. love, Allie XX (Report) Reply

  • Brian Dorn (7/4/2006 1:54:00 PM)


    Linda, a very passionate and tempting invitation. A soulful write... well done!
    Brian
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/24/2006 11:51:00 PM)


    LINDA...PASSION AFLOW ME...VERY NICE WORK...CLEAN LINEAGE, SMOOTH FLUX...BEAUTIFUL WRITE! ....AND I KNOW YA DON'T CARE...BUT I'M A TENNIN' YA UP JUS' TH' SAME...FRANK (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 24, 2005

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 15, 2007


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