Ego No More Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Ego No More
Ego has to go for sure
From mind and nature
It harms more
Should be shunned therefore
Why at all to have?
Why we must irresponsibly behave?
It helps us in no way
Takes friends and dear ones away
When life is unsecured
What can be assured?
Why to keep pride and selfish interest?
They may never serve best
It is good to feel honest
Love the life best and rest
It is nice to feel noble
And avoid trouble
Life is not only to be lived
But believed too with belief
It has some important aspects
Life is to relive and act
Enjoy with fun
Never get confused and run away
It may not leave you till end
So make best use and treat as friend
tanmay kumar SankhuaLess than a minute ago nice thought Comment +1 nice poem
Post Very good thoughts, i love it Dev Parkash Nischal4 minutes ago Very nice flowing worded poem Comment +1 good
Hasmukh Mehta welcome jairamji n shivani singh a few seconds ago · Unlike
Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh! 5 hours ago · Unlike · 1
Sheila Ann Anderson very well said about an hour ago · Unlike · 1
There's some good emotion and a message of honesty in these thoughts that are worthy of verse... David Lekich35 minutes ago But as a poem, it seems to me to lack structure, coherence and, here, rhyme and rhythym. I'd suggest, for what it's worth, focusing on the message you want to convey, and consider whether rhyme is the best vehicle to do so. I think this poem may have more potential if you abandon the rhyme scheme and focus on your theme: let me understand better why ego should be shunned; why ego is contrary to the many things that are of value (honesty; nobility) . Just my opinion- good luck! Comment 1 Comment0 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago rhythm is my l ife. poetry may not come easily for me without it..5000 poems same syle n way, apprecaited world wide dear 0
R K Chowdary Jasti Wonderful write with great and essential thoughts! Hasmukh Ji about a minute ago · Unlike · 1
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Ego has to go for sure From mind and nature