Elegy For Jane Poem by Theodore Roethke

Elegy For Jane

Rating: 3.9


(My student, thrown by a horse)

I remember the neckcurls, limp and damp as tendrils;
And her quick look, a sidelong pickerel smile;
And how, once started into talk, the light syllables leaped for her.
And she balanced in the delight of her thought,
A wren, happy, tail into the wind,
Her song trembling the twigs and small branches.
The shade sang with her;
The leaves, their whispers turned to kissing,
And the mould sang in the bleached valleys under the rose.

Oh, when she was sad, she cast herself down into such a pure depth,
Even a father could not find her:
Scraping her cheek against straw,
Stirring the clearest water.
My sparrow, you are not here,
Waiting like a fern, making a spiney shadow.
The sides of wet stones cannot console me,
Nor the moss, wound with the last light.

If only I could nudge you from this sleep,
My maimed darling, my skittery pigeon.
Over this damp grave I speak the words of my love:
I, with no rights in this matter,
Neither father nor lover.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hillary Herbert 28 February 2007

Elegy for Jane is one of the most captivating and heartfelt poems I have ever read. Theodore Roethke's talent is unparalleled.

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Anne Bradstreet 21 March 2007

True dat represent T-dog!

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Claudia Krizay 25 April 2011

i first read this poem in high school- Very heartfelt- a great write!

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Michael Shepherd 26 April 2005

Such a graceful tribute in its discreet emotion.

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Thabani Khumalo 16 June 2015

I have a vision to write like this, only if god would bless me enough to.ab

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Felipe 10 March 2020

Loves student motherfaq

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Scharlie Meeuws 08 October 2017

Sadly, just read about this poet, that he already died in the sixties.....and no wonder he was loved and read by so many...

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Scharlie Meeuws 08 October 2017

Your poem is touching all my heartstrings. It has beautiful images that convey deep feelings. Thank you so much for sharing... Scharlie

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Rajnish Manga 11 July 2017

If only I could nudge you from this sleep, My maimed darling, my skittery pigeon. Over this damp grave.... //.... It is so emotional. To recall the images of a small daughter who is no more. RIP, Jane.

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M Sagnik Das 24 May 2017

this is so good. peace/////////

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Theodore Roethke

Theodore Roethke

Michigan / United States
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