Elizabeth's Capitulation Poem by Fay Slimm

Elizabeth's Capitulation

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Ere she arrived,
.................... her lover derides her.
Sought to advise her
.......................... to forego this bliss.

They had dreamt of this,
.....................and were all prepared
For ardour,
............... but not for events like this.

She clung to their passion,
............................... vowed devotion,
Behaved as youth must do
......................., .... he then proposed
A death-pact if consent
............................ was not motioned
By acceptance from kin,
..................... now their staunch foes.

What could they do,
................ the portents were against
Such senselessness,
............ but was time their defence.?

(To Be Continued)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lawrence Beck 27 August 2009

I agree with others, Fay. I'm enjoying each installment. Larry

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Carol Gall 27 August 2009

fay i wait till the next one with happiness

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Lynda Robson 27 August 2009

Great write Fay, can't wait for the next part, 10 Lynda xx

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