A Pure Love. Poem by Fay Slimm

A Pure Love.

Rating: 4.9


As the snowdropp sea of glistening white
Envelopes and amazes me, I, standing
Here in a woodland clearing think of mighty
Love. This waving scene of purity hangs
It's every head of gleam shyly downward
In a modest pose, but lift each face and
Look at love so pure it takes us forward
In accepting states of grace that random
Fate never planned, but rather Godly love
Created. They glow with light, and scented
Subtly, are as fresh as dawn. Just above
This ocean of delight hangs, relentless,
January sky which now threatens rain.
Pure love is snowdropp white and gives itself.
I must away but I will come again
To find a presence here which can be felt.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Don Pengilly 18 April 2012

I love this poem, thanks Fay

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 29 January 2009

What a sweet and Innocent scene played here, love in it's purest form... Andy 10

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Josephine J.W 29 January 2009

This it beautiful...the kind of poem you can respect and cuddle with at the same time. Really a beautiful description and well written...

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Kris Smith 29 January 2009

That was such a beautiful write Fay romance in true poetry 10 +++ Chris

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Catrina Heart 29 January 2009

Pure love written in beautiful poetic verses, nice metaphors used...10

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Chinedu Dike 01 November 2020

Powerfully and moving penned.

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Ellen Ni Bheachain 27 April 2020

Pure love is snowdrop white and gives itself. Lovely sentimental way of putting it.

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Martins Akhoeneto 08 May 2018

Nice lines artistically crafted

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Donward Bughaw 29 May 2016

well-written poem maam. like it

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 December 2014

A subtle great freeverse poem on devotional love. So nice to read u again.

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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