Emaciated Love Poem by Hazelyn Usop

Emaciated Love



When I met you, my believe is that your perfect for me
For your reflection is an ideal man to be love
And I’m almost giving you everything, even my soul
With my pledge of long lasting love
It’s regrettable to think our past
Because now there’s no love left for us to share

I just can’t find the grounds
Why we need to end this way
I knew that its hurts
But I never expected this kind of pain
A malady started from my heart
And disseminated in all parts of my body

We had faced many trials
And you command me to surrender
It’s regrettable to contemplate the attachment
That we once owned swiftly vanished
A wonderful love has emaciated

If this an ordeal that I’m incline to face
Mistake is the best teacher
That’s why I’m here to suffer
If only there’s a way
To brought back our lost love
I’ll do it willingly with all my heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendran Muthiah 12 January 2012

Sparkling thoughts are there. As we long for signals from the distant computer, you await eagerly the response. Time will bring you to join together, to commit more mistakes and to grieve more. Some grammar mistakes here and there need to be taken care of. Cheers!

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