Tuesday, March 1, 2005

Emotion Comments

Rating: 3.2

Hide behind your wall,
so every time you fall,
nobody will see who you really are.
Why are you afraid of revealing your feelings?
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David Lomenick
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David Lomenick 11 August 2005

In this poem I was writing about one of my friends AND about myself hiding my feelings from the world and never speaking my mind or how I felt about something, but i'm slowly starting to change that and pouring my feelings out to all my friends and also smiling alot more...i'm glad i've changed that...

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Raynette Eitel 22 June 2005

David, print out this sign above where you write. It is a quote from Archibald MacLeish 'A POEM MUST NOT MEAN BUT BE.' This one was more prose than poetry and said harsh things to someone...Let your poem be the feeling, not spelling it out in angry, prosey sentences. Raynette

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Cliff Morman 02 March 2005

This is a great title its also has got a good message but it needed just a little mor refining shorting up just a little here and there but stil good

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