Ashton Weibel

Empress - Poem by Ashton Weibel

Darkness lurking at my soul
following breath by breath
Majestic queen I've seen so foul
exchanging secrets for my death

To whom I meet shall I ever pass
beyond this dream is sinking
Blinding Light the empress cast
my ending life is leaking...

Comments about Empress by Ashton Weibel

  • (1/27/2010 10:40:00 PM)

    Keep writing, your true voice will develop. This is a poem full of angst, yet it would be aided by revision. I hope you continue to write, and do so incessantly. It is the only way any of us find our place and pace within the literary world. (Report) Reply

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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (1/27/2010 8:30:00 PM)

    quite sad huh? ..... anyway, nice write! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 27, 2010

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