Empress Poem by Ashton Weibel

Empress



Darkness lurking at my soul
following breath by breath
Majestic queen I've seen so foul
exchanging secrets for my death

To whom I meet shall I ever pass
beyond this dream is sinking
Blinding Light the empress cast
my ending life is leaking...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hunter Dasten 27 January 2010

Keep writing, your true voice will develop. This is a poem full of angst, yet it would be aided by revision. I hope you continue to write, and do so incessantly. It is the only way any of us find our place and pace within the literary world.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 January 2010

quite sad huh? ..... anyway, nice write!

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