Emptiness Within Poem by Tori chanthawoharn

Emptiness Within

Rating: 4.8


There’s a pain that I am feeling
That leaves inside the hole
An emptiness, never again replaced
It took away my lonely soul

I’m nothing in our world
A nobody in this cruel place
Why can’t I make a difference?
Always hiding my true face

Maybe there’s a hope for me
A chance for me to shine
I’ll make a difference in this life.
Find the chance and make it mine.

Someone please get me out of here
Help me find myself again
I need some way to free my soul
To release the emptiness within.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Undine Roxie 16 December 2011

That's exactly how I feel! I like it when I find myself in poems...very good poem! 10 <3

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Tork Souad Diana 16 December 2011

It is a poem that reflects a lot of bitterness but yet it is so beautiful. Well done=> 10

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