Empty Poem by jofelson abracia

Empty

Rating: 4.5


I woke up empty
empty of courage
Drowned with doubts and confusion
Empty of strength no guts to face the day
Impossible to make any cognition
Lying on my coffin-considered bed
I can feel the pressure building up my head
I pushed myself forward towards the window
What would happen today, I still don't know
And piece-by-piece I started grow
Gathered enough courage so I decided to go
Locked doors behind me
I feel prepared sufficiently
With all might I can now face the day
Sunshine following me as I paced along the hallway
Then, a block ahead I saw her glimmering
With my forehead started to sweat I know I was glittering
Every step I take, a bottle of courage break
I am not sure if my courage will reach her
With the last bottle of courage
I was an arm close to her
She turned around to face me
and the last bottle exploded and stunned me
And there in front of her
I was again empty

Thursday, April 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: confusion,courage,sad love,scared
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 01 May 2015

Well articulated and nicely penned piece of poetry. Always remember that it will take you nothing to be a man, because you're born a man. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕9

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Kelly Kurt 30 April 2015

Wonderfully written, Jofelson. I enjoyed reading. Thanks

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