Empty Poem by Margaret O Driscoll

Empty

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Feeling cold and empty
Like the carriage of that train
A flurry of snowflakes falling
Her heart weighed down in pain

She had waited on the platform
Not expecting a 'no show'
Now her hopes have swirled downwards
She leaves empty in the snow

Sunday, June 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: leaves,lonely,snow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ella Simone 01 January 2016

So sad

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Margaret O Driscoll 15 January 2016

Thank you Ella, I wrote it in response to a picture!

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