The Sands Of Time Poem by Margaret O Driscoll

The Sands Of Time

Rating: 4.8


The sands of time eroded that
broad smile from your face but
of that carefree ebullient character
I still can see some trace

The sands of time were crushing,
though submerged, you didn't sink
With faith and love as anchors
you're more buoyant than you think

Thursday, May 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: faith
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 19 May 2020

'though submerged, you didn't sink' - this line speaks of his/her character. Sands of time erode our shores; faith and love are the essential ingredients for survival. A nice poem, with a good message.

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Chinedu Dike 10 January 2020

An insightful piece of poetry with beautiful rendition of words. Thanks for sharing, Margaret.

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Mary Mc Creath 03 June 2017

I feel a sense of sadness in first verse... encouraging last line

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Mary Mc Creath 03 June 2017

I feel a hint of sadness in the first verse.... Encouraging last line

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Thanks so much Mary, nice to end in a positive

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Thanks so much x

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