Empty Life Poem by DEEPESH DEWANGAN

Empty Life

Rating: 4.5


I am not a brilliant creation,
My ideas are my creation.
Forced success are valued,
But give strength to dreams.

My success gives me unity;
My failure is empty life.
I hope for sympathy,
But selfish world trolls in failures.

Expecting rise to my dreams,
This empty life is indicating.
Those ideas which are never created,
Are waiting for creators.

My feelings and prospects,
Sends a worthy conclusion;
If world is not yours,
Make it yours.

End this puzzled marathon;
With glory and filled colours,
Leave behind the empty life!

Tuesday, October 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: feeling
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
DEEPESH DEWANGAN 01 November 2015

Thank you guys for giving respect to my poem and chinedu dike surely i will look forward to your poem.

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Chinedu Dike 31 October 2015

An inspiring piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Deepesh. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Leah Ayliffe 27 October 2015

Wonderful! Love that you indicate you have to take control and fill up the emptiness of life with your own creations :)

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Ratnakar Mandlik 27 October 2015

End this puzzled marathon; With glory and filled colors, Leave behind the empty life The positive concluding note in conclusion. indicates that after all the life can not remain empty. Nice conclusion. Thanks.8 points.

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