Empty Life - Poem by DEEPESH DEWANGAN

I am not a brilliant creation,
My ideas are my creation.
Forced success are valued,
But give strength to dreams.

My success gives me unity;
My failure is empty life.
I hope for sympathy,
But selfish world trolls in failures.

Expecting rise to my dreams,
This empty life is indicating.
Those ideas which are never created,
Are waiting for creators.

My feelings and prospects,
Sends a worthy conclusion;
If world is not yours,
Make it yours.

End this puzzled marathon;
With glory and filled colours,
Leave behind the empty life!

Topic(s) of this poem: feeling

Comments about Empty Life by DEEPESH DEWANGAN

  • (11/1/2015 12:29:00 AM)

    Thank you guys for giving respect to my poem and chinedu dike surely i will look forward to your poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Chinedu Dike (10/31/2015 6:55:00 PM)

    An inspiring piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Deepesh. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Leah Ayliffe (10/27/2015 12:34:00 PM)

    Wonderful! Love that you indicate you have to take control and fill up the emptiness of life with your own creations :) (Report) Reply

  • (10/27/2015 11:41:00 AM)

    End this puzzled marathon;
    With glory and filled colors,
    Leave behind the empty life
    The positive concluding note in conclusion. indicates that after all the life can not remain empty. Nice conclusion. Thanks.8 points.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 27, 2015

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