Empty Promises Poem by Ram Chamanooru

Empty Promises



Promises are like fish
They are to be kept in aquarium; else they slip away!
Promises are like birds
They are to be kept in a cage; else they fly away!
Promises are like snow flakes
They are to be kept in deep freeze; else they melt away!
Promises are like dreams
They are to be viewed in trance; else they fade away!

Sunday, April 20, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: birds,fish,snow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 21 April 2008

i'll promise to read more of your piece...........so write more

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Abha Sharma 20 April 2008

very nice similes and rich imagery... promises if broken cannot be called promises..well composed.

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