Empty Space Poem by Chas Weeden

Empty Space

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Reaching out to infinitude
when words have come to an end.
Yan Yu

Presence, without;
the space framed
but left empty.
Mountains float
as a fisherman
ignores, wishing
only for a fish
to feed his family.

Empty space is
space for us
to not ignore.
We fill it with
our emptiness -
and together
the picture paints
your presence.

Empty Space
Sunday, October 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: longing,reflection,remembrance
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Viewer looks at the empty space in a Chinese scroll.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 17 May 2020

Such a nice poem, Chas. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 April 2020

Empty space is space for us to not ignore. We fill it with our emptiness - and together the picture paints your presence. Emptiness fllled with your presence.... a fine poem indeed. tony

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