lil miss

Empty Words

you called me darling
but you caused me pain
you told me you loved me
but was it all in vain?

you called me princess
but you brought me down
you kicked out my pedestal
and stepped on my crown

you called me baby
but you left me alone
not one knock at my door
or missed call on my phone

so i'll call you cold
and i'll call you heartless
i'll call you whatever i want to,
regardless.

Poem Submitted: Friday, June 5, 2009

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Comments about Empty Words by lil miss

  • Nicole Balbuena (2/18/2010 9:40:00 PM)

    This is deep.
    and thanks for the comment, btw :)
    This is kinda like half of a verse, you should continue...

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  • John Lyday (6/9/2009 10:55:00 PM)

    Nothing sappy here. Good rhyme and well crafted. You conveyed the emotion very well.

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  • Sandra MartyresSandra Martyres (6/5/2009 3:21:00 PM)

    Lovely piece, full of emotion 10

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  • Her Name Is Taylor (6/5/2009 11:46:00 AM)

    that was soo good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ...omg, i can see how u must be feeling, that was good, seriously, i couldnt agree with cheyenne more, im speechless, very very very well done! ! ! ! 100,000! ! ! ! ! !

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  • Chey King (6/5/2009 11:20:00 AM)

    Wow... I'm speechless... AMAZING! ! ! 10+++++++++++

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