Empty Words Poem by lil miss

Empty Words

Rating: 4.1


you called me darling
but you caused me pain
you told me you loved me
but was it all in vain?

you called me princess
but you brought me down
you kicked out my pedestal
and stepped on my crown

you called me baby
but you left me alone
not one knock at my door
or missed call on my phone

so i'll call you cold
and i'll call you heartless
i'll call you whatever i want to,
regardless.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nicole Balbuena 18 February 2010

This is deep. and thanks for the comment, btw :) This is kinda like half of a verse, you should continue...

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John Lyday 09 June 2009

Nothing sappy here. Good rhyme and well crafted. You conveyed the emotion very well.

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Sandra Martyres 05 June 2009

Lovely piece, full of emotion 10

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Chey King 05 June 2009

Wow... I'm speechless... AMAZING! ! ! 10+++++++++++

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