It is wonderful to know
when so many take their invaluable time
to encourage a non English poet
in English poetography
and
help a villager
in the finer nuances of composing poetry
in a language other than one's own
all have indirectly informed you
how wonderful it would be
if you composed poetry as did Tagore in Bengali
and
earned the Poet Laurette
as India's first non English poet
I see the elements of yellow dates
and
white mulberry
catch up in the eye's
lovely fruit trees
and
a lovely poet one day you shall be
so many have taken pains to read thee
my friend
your poetry evokes a senses of innocence
keep at it
there are very minuscule poets
like thee
you are a future poetree
Encouragement indeed! ! ! ! I would never thought encouragement could be so... poetic! The imagery set this poem to winging- - I see the elements of yellow dates and white mulberry catch up in the eye's lovely fruit trees - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Excellent use of imagery to deepen the verses. Excellent literary choice to do this. It is wonderful to know when so many take their invaluable time to encourage a non English poet in English poetography and help a villager in the finer nuances of composing poetry - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -The perfect lines to begin your poem- -sets a we are together tone to the piece as well as demonstrating that you are not afraid to play with words, the oil paints of a poet. Excellent. Enjoyed reading this and felt quite uplifted and refreshed. A happy 10+++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Every poet needs encouragement besides inspiration otherwise he is frustrated and gives up writing poems.