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Our Adorable-M A N - Poem by me poet yeps poet

''to run my fingers
along the contours
of your body just
to ignite the love....''MAN

Very sensuous poetry
I AM A POET ROMANTIC

Shall wait for thee in eternity
hope we exchange our bodies

as JA WANTED ME to be

thanks for the inspiration ye
have given to me

we may meet only in dreams
and
memories

Abide till then with me

I will be what you want me to be
but will you wait that long for me

I wonder
am in quandary

10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++=
can't give more
sorryI be
kindly excuse
POET in d me......................

Topic(s) of this poem: hope, human, human brain, humour, love, love and dreams, love and friendship, poet, poetic expression, poetry


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  • Poet Poet (9/18/2019 7:08:00 PM)

    Well expressed and philosophically constructed work, in each of our cultures we are

    CONTD When i read this poem I see it as the ultimate love letter to the divine creator, that the act of love making brings us closer to the divine. Everyone should celebrate these words
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  • Poet Poet (9/18/2019 7:07:00 PM)

    Well expressed and philosophically constructed work, in each of our cultures we are all indoctrinated with a belief in a creator, as we grow older, some of us become wiser to the flaws in what we are taught. Eventually the wise come to their own beliefs. Our minds find our beliefs. Great Poem, pity nobody else has commented they should! ...Ecstatic ectoplasmic ecstasy, your words are a celebration of the passions of mans viral passions. (Report)Reply

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  • Kevin Patrick (9/18/2019 5:26:00 PM)

    Ecstatic ectoplasmic ecstasy, your words are a celebration of the passions of mans viral passions. When i read this poem I see it as the ultimate love letter to the divine creator, that the act of love making brings us closer to the divine. Everyone should celebrate these words! (Report)Reply

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  • Sylvia Frances Chan (6/17/2019 10:29:00 AM)

    There is always HUMOR in your poems, concerning the ones you love or make them later to be loved by your words or thoughts, it be truly, it be sardonical, but constantly poems with a HINT to think further, a tiny bit different than a thought provoking poem, yours, Sir is as transparent as the windowpanes in my home, I like some of them and some I do not like, but the constant sardonic smile upon your face, I like that very much. SFC (Report)Reply

    Poet Poet(6/17/2019 2:19:00 PM)

    thanks so beautifully put across ma'am...Sir is as transparent as the windowpanes in my home, I like some of them and some I do not like, but the constant sardonic smile upon your face, I like that very much. SFC

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  • (5/28/2019 3:40:00 PM)

    Dude,
    Your profile says your are 78 but your writing says you are 13 and just tasting your first hormones!
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    (6/17/2019 2:21:00 PM)

    your are
    I AM 78 but your writing says you are 13 MY MIND IS STILL YOUTHFUL ACTIVE SPERMATIC LOL
    and just tasting your first hormones! NOT LASTED ALL AS YET

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  • Srijita Mondal (5/8/2019 8:24:00 AM)

    good poem on M A N..10++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Poet Poet (2/25/2019 11:27:00 AM)

    thank uuuuuuuuuu all who liked this give credit to MAN read his poetry (Report)Reply

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  • (2/25/2019 10:12:00 AM)

    3 time i read it.
    I don't know what make me read again
    I will read again and again.
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  • (2/25/2019 10:11:00 AM)

    I will be what you want me to be
    but will you wait that long for me..... Excellent couplet...
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  • (2/25/2019 10:10:00 AM)

    I will be what you want me to be
    but will you wait that long for me..... Excellent couplet
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  • (2/25/2019 10:09:00 AM)

    What a wonderful poem MAN. Nice work. (Report)Reply

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  • Poet Poet (2/22/2019 8:00:00 AM)

    Mohammed Asim Nehal
    (1/20/2019 3: 18: 00 AM)
    It is your greatness to find beauty on someone's work and admire it wholeheartedly. Excellent expression.10+++
    MAN
    IS an excellent Indian poet
    the first few lines are his contribution
    and hence the praise should go to him
    not me
    I have already REQUESTED

    ''to run my fingers
    along the contours
    of your body just
    to ignite the love]]]]]]]] thee words are of poet M. A.. N PLEASE NOTE CAREFULLY
    M A N...MOHAMMED ASIM NEHAL
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  • Poet Poet (2/22/2019 7:56:00 AM)

    MAN
    IS an excellent Indian poet
    the first few lines are his contribution
    and hence the praise should go to him
    not me
    I have already REQUESTED

    to run my fingers
    along the contours
    of your body just
    to ignite the love]]]]]]]]these words are of poet
    M A N...MOHAMMED ASIM NEHAL
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  • Poet Poet (2/22/2019 7:53:00 AM)

    MAN
    IS an excellent Indian poet
    the first few lines are his contribution
    and hence the praise should go to him
    not me
    I have already REQUESTED
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  • (2/21/2019 11:24:00 PM)

    X c lent
    'to run my fingers
    along the contours
    of your body just
    to ignite the love....''MAN
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  • (2/21/2019 11:22:00 PM)

    Great opening, avoid using short forms in poem. You can write good poems.Thanks (Report)Reply

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  • (2/21/2019 11:21:00 PM)

    Sensual beginning but seriou ending. (Report)Reply

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  • Prabir Gayen (2/4/2019 5:45:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem from a wonderful heart... (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (1/31/2019 7:55:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem by my great friend. Thanks. (Report)Reply

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  • Ramesh T A (1/30/2019 7:30:00 AM)

    You are in a quandary till you meet your counterpart! Nice one to read! All the best, my friend! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 18, 2019



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