Our Adorable-M A N - Poem by me poet yeps poet

Well expressed and philosophically constructed work, in each of our cultures we are

CONTD When i read this poem I see it as the ultimate love letter to the divine creator, that the act of love making brings us closer to the divine. Everyone should celebrate these words (Report)Reply

Well expressed and philosophically constructed work, in each of our cultures we are all indoctrinated with a belief in a creator, as we grow older, some of us become wiser to the flaws in what we are taught. Eventually the wise come to their own beliefs. Our minds find our beliefs. Great Poem, pity nobody else has commented they should! ...Ecstatic ectoplasmic ecstasy, your words are a celebration of the passions of mans viral passions. (Report)Reply

Ecstatic ectoplasmic ecstasy, your words are a celebration of the passions of mans viral passions. When i read this poem I see it as the ultimate love letter to the divine creator, that the act of love making brings us closer to the divine. Everyone should celebrate these words! (Report)Reply

There is always HUMOR in your poems, concerning the ones you love or make them later to be loved by your words or thoughts, it be truly, it be sardonical, but constantly poems with a HINT to think further, a tiny bit different than a thought provoking poem, yours, Sir is as transparent as the windowpanes in my home, I like some of them and some I do not like, but the constant sardonic smile upon your face, I like that very much. SFC (Report)Reply

Poet Poet(6/17/2019 2:19:00 PM)

thanks so beautifully put across ma'am...Sir is as transparent as the windowpanes in my home, I like some of them and some I do not like, but the constant sardonic smile upon your face, I like that very much. SFC

Dude,
Your profile says your are 78 but your writing says you are 13 and just tasting your first hormones! (Report)Reply

Poet Poet(6/17/2019 2:21:00 PM)

your are
I AM 78 but your writing says you are 13 MY MIND IS STILL YOUTHFUL ACTIVE SPERMATIC LOL
and just tasting your first hormones! NOT LASTED ALL AS YET

good poem on M A N..10++++ (Report)Reply

thank uuuuuuuuuu all who liked this give credit to MAN read his poetry (Report)Reply

3 time i read it.
I don't know what make me read again
I will read again and again. (Report)Reply

I will be what you want me to be
but will you wait that long for me..... Excellent couplet... (Report)Reply

I will be what you want me to be
but will you wait that long for me..... Excellent couplet (Report)Reply

What a wonderful poem MAN. Nice work. (Report)Reply

Mohammed Asim Nehal
(1/20/2019 3: 18: 00 AM)
It is your greatness to find beauty on someone's work and admire it wholeheartedly. Excellent expression.10+++
MAN
IS an excellent Indian poet
the first few lines are his contribution
and hence the praise should go to him
not me
I have already REQUESTED

''to run my fingers
along the contours
of your body just
to ignite the love]]]]]]]] thee words are of poet M. A.. N PLEASE NOTE CAREFULLY
M A N...MOHAMMED ASIM NEHAL (Report)Reply

MAN
IS an excellent Indian poet
the first few lines are his contribution
and hence the praise should go to him
not me
I have already REQUESTED

to run my fingers
along the contours
of your body just
to ignite the love]]]]]]]]these words are of poet
M A N...MOHAMMED ASIM NEHAL (Report)Reply

MAN
IS an excellent Indian poet
the first few lines are his contribution
and hence the praise should go to him
not me
I have already REQUESTED (Report)Reply

X c lent
'to run my fingers
along the contours
of your body just
to ignite the love....''MAN (Report)Reply

Great opening, avoid using short forms in poem. You can write good poems.Thanks (Report)Reply

Sensual beginning but seriou ending. (Report)Reply

Wonderful poem from a wonderful heart... (Report)Reply

A wonderful poem by my great friend. Thanks. (Report)Reply

You are in a quandary till you meet your counterpart! Nice one to read! All the best, my friend! (Report)Reply